Who's Coach's little piggy?

This took me a month to finish
I'm really glad I did though. I told myself I wanted this finished by last night and I did. It took a lot of work, and a
lot of going back to the creepy Meat Circus and a lot of willpower and a lot of patience, but I finished it. I'm sort of
surprised. Usually when things take me this long I just sort of give up on them, but I made myself finish it and besides a few minor flaws I love how it turned out.

The two pages separate between where Raz drops the bunny and he Psi-blasts the evil demon bunny. I fear it may be noticable that I rushed a bit on that second page. I barely did anything with it until the first page (which I just love all over) was done, which was a big mistake. Though I love how the red panel turned out. I wasn't quite sure what to do with it, and all the red was purely experimental, but I love how it turned out. For the Raz in the panel just before it I was trying to go for a, \"Icannotevencomprehendtheincompetencethat isgoingoninfrontofmyface\" look, which I'm a little on the fence on if I captured or not. And I don't really like the little Oly in the panel where the bunny's jumping away, but I think i made up for it with the last two.

So basically I want to be a graphic novelist, and here I was working with my storytelling through imagery. This consists of two pages, so it gets a little choppy between them but other than that I think people are going to be able to figure out what's going on. Unless they haven't played Psychonauts. D: (See the link at the end of this paragraph if you haven't, but beware, thar be spoilers ) [link]

I don't have a sub, but if you have some critique for me, I insist you leave it in a comment.


All of this was done by hand. All of it. Now watch it be my least popular deviation.... D:


tl;dr: I worked hard on this, appreciate it! D:<

_{In retrospect, putting so much time and effort into something barely any people were going to understand was probably not the best idea. Oh well.}